Wild Coast

They were right to call it wild.
Even here, the houses of this
wind-beaten city grow taciturn,
and in their huddles,
speak only in hushed tones,
seem poised on tip toes,
and feel like stiff tourists,
or those who don’t stay long.

For there is still something
it commands in us,
as with the uneasiness of children
in the matriarch’s cloying room.
Here, we learn of limits,
and find again
the muteness of our steps.

And what do we know
of its quarrel with the sea,
which has left deep scars
in these cliffs,
or of the burden of salt
which it carries?
We are a passing of seabirds,
a foam of scattered centuries,

while it carves us
beneath a weight of solitude.
Between the waves
that breach like whales,
it remains the last
untranslatable, wild word,
a shoulder of wind.

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2 thoughts on “Wild Coast

  1. Although this poem possibly is meant to concern a “Wild Coast”, the metaphors and imagery soften the “wild” element. Like these lines:

    “We are a passing of seabirds,
    a foam of scattered centuries,

    while it carves us
    beneath a weight of solitude.”

    Was this the intended effect? (Even if it wasn’t, it’s still a poem of a high standard. Awesome!)

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